Fabulous finish

This my fabulous finish I did a descriptive passage about Peg the only reason I did Peg because she was at the start and she kinda made it to the end, Peg really touched my heart a lot because I love how she is loyal, loving, caring. I think every kid should know Peg and her story but I wish she didn't pass, to be honest I wish it was Mr Bill Wiltshire that got put in jail or something maybe I just talking smack because I hated Peg passing but that is why I chose her.